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I figured out a way to combine the two stories I had in mind. I started over and wrote 3,000 words today. I am happy with both the content, the storyline and amount of writing I was able to get done today.

I revised the first chapter, if you want to see it, it's here.



The last sudden event came out of no where. Good hook.

A big fat A for originality. Great surprise at the end. Now I want to know more...I'm hooked.
Good job.